Eliezer father had passed away he had a bumpy road (difficult life) but he was there for his children. Back in the days they wouldn't have funerals they would just put them in the dirt with no show of respect. If i Eliezer i would have said some words for his father.......
Here lies my father, he lived a difficult life but no matter what he was always there for me. His the reason i am still alive his the reason i am who i am today, I give all my respect towards you father. I'm never going to forget those days we spent to gather fighting with the dead. Even though we would starve to death we helped each other in the bad times. Father I love you and i will never forget all the good things you have done to help me succeed thank you. May you rest in peace father.
"I" is always capitalized. You want to be sure to edit and proofread your work before you publish it.
ReplyDeleteAlso, I do not see anything about how their relationship changes over the course of the story.
7/10